Thursday, April 12, 2007

sigh

Fractured should have come out as below (without the asterisks). Apparently the blog disagreed with my formatting, but the form of the poem was very essential to its reading so... one more time for the money:

f***** As fissures form
*r***** and swell and rage
**a***** and new life grows
***c***** in the creases made
****t***** fertile by life passing
*****u***** by and by, I sit here
******r***** wondering all the while
*******e***** if new life created by death
********d***** is so worthy I should let it go.

If that didn't work, then I don't care anymore. Use your imaginiation.

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